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Table of Contents

Part I, Detailed Cases


Chapter 1. The Case of Stephen Wang (Free)

Ph.D. with Scholarship / Journalism / New York University

Interview with Stephen

Stephen's Personal Data and Personal Statement

Stephen's Application Tips

Chapter 2. The Case of Zhigang Zhang

Ph.D. with Scholarship / Biochemical Engineering / University of Minnesota

Interview with Zhigang Zhang

Zhang's Personal Data and Personal Statement

Two Reference Letters

Zhang's Application Tips

Chapter 3. The Case of Henry Li

Master with Scholarship / Computer Science/ Carnegie Mellon University

Interview with Henry Li

Li's Personal Data and Personal Statement

Chapter 4. The Case of Chen Yang

Ph.D. with Scholarship / Environmental Science / Ohio State University

Interview with Chen Yang

Yang's Personal Data and Personal Statement

Chapter 5. The Case of Pearl

Ph.D. with Scholarship / Biomedical Science / Rochester University

Interview with Pearl

Pearl's Personal Data and Personal Statement

Pearl's Application Tips

Chapter 6. The Case of Charles Sui

Ph.D. with Scholarship / Electronic Engineering / UC San Diego

Interview with Charles Sui

Sui's Personal Data and Personal Statement

Chapter 7. The Case of Yuanyuan Ding

Ph.D. with Scholarship / Air Traffic Management / Texas A & M University

Interview with Yuanyuan Ding

Ding's Personal Data and Personal Statement

Chapter 8. The Case of Meryl

Master with Scholarship / Economics / Tufts University

Interview with Meryl

Meryl's Personal Data and Personal Statement

Chapter 9. The Case of Chenguang Li

Ph.D. with Scholarship / Nuclear Engineering / Ohio State University

Interview with Chenguang Li

Li's Personal Data and Personal Statement

Chapter 10. The Case of Lee

Ph.D. with Scholarship / Electrical Engineering / Virginia Institute of Technology

Interview with Lee

Lee's Personal Data and Personal Statement

Chapter 11. The Case of Coly

Master with Scholarship / Public Law / University of Georgia

Interview with Coly

Lee's Personal Data and Personal Statement

Chapter 12. The Case of Xiaodong Cai

Ph.D. with Scholarship / Public Health Johns Hopkins University

Interview with Xiaodong Cai

Cai's Personal Data and Personal Statement

Two Reference Letters

Chapter 13. The Case of Chaoli Wang

Ph.D. with Scholarship / Computer Science / Ohio State University

Interview with Chaoli Wang

Wang's Personal Data and Personal Statement

Chapter 14. The Case of Lin Jiang

Master with Tuition Waiver / Information system Management / UC Berkeley

Interview with Lin Jiang

Jiang's Personal Data and Personal Statement

My Journey to My Dream School -- UC Berkeley

Chapter 15. The Case of Xiang Li

Ph.D. with Scholarship / Economics / University of Washington

Interview with Xiang Li

Li's Personal Data and Personal Statement

Chapter 16. The Case of Gorden Xu

Ph.D. with Scholarship / Chemistry / Washington University

Interview with Gorden Xu

Xu's Personal Data and Personal Statement

Chapter 17. The Case of Margaret

Master with Scholarship / English language and Linguistics / University of Arizona

Interview with Margaret

Margaret's Personal Data and Personal Statement

Chapter 18. The Case of Jiji Zhang

Ph.D. with Scholarship / Philosophy / Carnegie Mellon University

Interview with Jiji Zhang

Zhang's Personal Data and Personal Statement

Chapter 19. The Case of Vivi

Ph.D. with Scholarship / East Asian Language and Literature/ Yale University

Interview with Vivi

Vivi's Personal Data and Personal Statement

Two Reference letters

Chapter 20. The Case of Qiuhua Xiong

Ph.D. with Scholarship / Material Science / Pennsylvania State University

Interview with Qihua Xiong

Xiong's Personal Data and Personal Statement

 

Part II, Personal Statement


Architecture

21. Jack / Ph.D. with Scholarship / University of Pennsylvania

Jack's Personal Data and Personal Statement

Biology

22. Dong Fan / Ph.D. with Scholarship / Baylor College of Medicine

Fan's Personal Data and Personal Statement

Chemical Engineering

23. Hairong Tang / Ph.D. with Scholarship / MIT

Tang's Personal Data and Personal Statement

Chemistry

24. Yimin Hu / Ph.D. with Scholarship / Stanford University

Hu's Personal Data and Personal Statement

25. Shu Jin / Ph.D. with Scholarship / Northwestern University

Jin's Personal Data and Personal Statement

Computer Science

26. Royer / Ph.D. with Scholarship / University of Maryland, Park College

Royer's Personal Data and Personal Statement

27. Peter / Ph.D. with Scholarship / A State University

Peter's Personal Data and Personal Statement

28. Ale / Master / Temple University

Ale's Personal Data and Personal Statement

 

Economics

29. Gloria / Ph.D. with Scholarship / Georgetown University

Gloria's Personal Data and Personal Statement

30. Jack / Ph.D. with Scholarship / Iowa State University

Jack's Personal Data and Personal Statement

31. Jihai Yu / Ph.D. with Scholarship / Ohio State University

Yu's Personal Data and Personal Statement

Education

32. Cherry / Ph.D. with Scholarship / Michigan State University

Cherry's Personal Data and Personal Statement


Electrical Engineering

33. Kejie Lai / Ph.D. with Scholarship / Princeton University

Lai's Personal Data and Personal Statement

34. Leonard / Ph.D. with Scholarship / Northwestern University

Leonard's Personal Data and Personal Statement

35. Kwon / Ph.D. with Scholarship / Princeton University

Kwon's Personal Data and Personal Statement

36. Lei Liu / Ph.D. with Scholarship / UCLA

Liu's Personal Data and Personal Statement

Interpersonal Communication

37. Jessica / Ph.D. with Scholarship / Purdue University

Jessica's Personal Data and Personal Statement

Pharmacy (Pharmaceutics)

38. Yan Xin / Ph.D. with Scholarship / Ohio State University

Yan Xin's Personal Data and Personal Statement

Mathematics

39. Andrew / Ph.D. with Scholarship / Johns Hopkins University

Andrew's Personal Data and Personal Statement

Mechanical Engineering

40. Yujie Wei / Ph.D. with Scholarship / Undisclosed

Wei's Personal Data and Personal Statement


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