MBA Essay Strategy: Quick Feedback

Need a quick second opinion? Submit your rough draft to our consultants and receive feedback within two business days. We will give you our objective opinion on where your essay stands compared with other applicants to similar schools, cite your essay's strengths and weaknesses, and target the areas most in need of improvement. Fee for quick feedback service is $200 per essay package/school.

Here are some sample feedbacks we had provided to our clients:

"In Essay Three, you need to show the link between your short-term and long-term goals. Rather than just stating you want to be a consultant in the long-term, it'd more useful to describe how you..."

"..you should capitalize on your experience in dealing with companies in the Asia Pacific region and highlight your successes at expanding those accounts that you handle. For instance, at Sony, you did an amazing job at ..."

"In tackling Essay Two, you may want to discuss your overseas training experience in Japan… and relate that to …"

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